《裸阳》 原文阅读笔记
啊看完《裸阳》了继续做（一点都不正经的）笔记。
完全是腐眼看人基的过度解读！丹贝丹！
1.The Spacer spoke. “Partner Elijah!”
Baley’shead turned toward the speaker with a jerk. His eyes rounded and he rose almost withou tvolition.
He stared at the face; at the broad, high cheekbones, the absolute calm of thefacial lines, the symmetry of the body, most of all at that level look out of nerveless blue eyes.
“D-daneel.”
The Spacer said, “It is pleasant that you remember me, Partner Elijah.”
“Rememberyou!” Baley felt relief wash over him. This being was a bit of Earth, a friend,a comfort,a savior. He had an almost unbearable desire to rush to the Spacer and embracehim, to hug him wildly, and laugh and pound his back and do all the foolish things old friendsdid when meeting once again after a separation.
Buthe didn’t. He couldn’t. He could only step forward, and hold out his hand andsay, “I’m not likely to forget you, Daneel.”
先是这个贝莱和丹尼尔再次相遇的场景，嗯，再次印证了我们的警探先生是个颜控+重度傲娇。在例行的“丹尼尔长得真标致”（不）之后，我们的警探先生内心涌起看一股想要跑过去拥抱人家的冲动，然而他忍住了。
Baley hoped earnestly that the creature’s unreadable eyes could not penetrate Baley’s mind and see that wild moment, just past and not yet entirely subsided, when all of Baley had concentrated into a feeling ofan intense friendship that was almost love.
而且冷静下来以后还有些心虚，希望丹尼尔看不出他内心刚才泛起的那种“近乎为爱的强烈友情”。真是够了。好吧，我们可以把这种情感解释为吊桥效应，但是，一般吊桥效应之后会发生什么……？
2.
“Well, good night,Daneel.”
“I will be in anotherbedroom, Partner Elijah. If, at any time during the night, you need anything--”
“I know. The robots willcome.”
“There is a contact patchon the side table. You have only to touch it. I will come too.”
话说忘记了是在哪里看到看到有人评论说这部里面丹尼尔就像老母鸡保护孩子一样护着贝莱不让他暴露到室外，让人觉得分外可爱。贝莱觉得他和丹尼尔是“nurse-infant relationship”，愤愤不平，不过丹尼尔确实救了他好几次诶。上面这段话里，贝莱本来打断丹尼尔说“我知道机器人会来的”，而丹尼尔特意强调了一遍“他自己也会来的”，我觉得这里潜意识里丹尼尔认为（虽然机器人不会“认为”）自己是贝莱所信赖的对象，那些低级的机器人是比不上他的……
我脑抽地觉得这里有那么，那么一点点吃醋的味道。
3.
Therewas a perceptible pause before the robot answered. It said, “Do you wish to make contact yourself, sir?”
“That’s right.”
Daneel touched Baley’s sleeve gently. “One moment, Partner Elijah.”
这里是丹尼尔即将向贝莱解释Solaria上机器人的特性，如果机器人们无法执行它们机能赋予它们的功能，他们会受伤的。摘这里没有什么深意，只是觉得这里的丹尼尔好温柔啊，他轻轻地拉了拉贝莱的袖子，这个动作莫名可爱；而且还十分关爱他的同类……丹尼尔真是小天使。
4.
“You could touch him, if you wanted to.”
“That’s right.”
She looked from one to the other and said, “Oh.”
It might have meant anything. Disgust? Revulsion?
Baley toyed with the idea of standing up, walking to Daneel and placing his hand flaton Daneel’s face. It might be interesting to watch her reaction.
贝莱想把手放到丹尼尔的脸上看看Gladia的反应。
……
我知道你想用“亲密的接触”来吓一吓Solaria人。但为什么是脸上？因为丹尼尔脸上的皮肤比较光滑吗？
5.
接第二条：说起吃醋还有一个非常精华的点。
“Soshe did. Yet did it seem entirely convincing to you? Twice she allowed herself to be seen in what you would consider a state of improper clothing--”
“Your conclusion,” saidBaley, “is that she was trying to seduce me. Is that it?”
“Seduce you away fromyour professional impersonality. So it would seem to me. And though I cannot share human reactions to stimuli, I would judge, from what has beenimprinted on my instruction circuits, that the lady meets any reasonable standard of physical attractiveness. From your behavior, moreover, it seems tome that you were aware of that and that you approved her appearance. I would evenjudge that Mrs. Delmarre acted rightly in thinking her mode of behavior would predispose you in her favor.”
刚开始接触Gladia的时候丹尼尔怀疑Gladia是不是想要引诱贝莱，他用了一个反问句“Yet did it seem entirelyconvincing to you?”，比起他平时说话的语气可以算得上是重了；反问句后面又来了个强调句强调“twice”——
带着情绪的反问句和强调句，搭配上丹尼尔惯用的书面腔，读着愣是有一种冷嘲热讽的酸意（不）——两次啊！以利亚伙伴！这个女人在你面前两次衣衫不整！你确定她不是别有所图吗！我虽然没有人类对于生理刺激的反应，但我懂！你刚才的反应都被我一清二楚地看见了！她就是吸引你了是不是！
然后快结尾的时候：
“Are you perhaps being influenced by extraneous motives of your own, Partner Elijah? Mrs.
Delmarreis an attractive woman and you are an Earthman in whom a preference for thepersonal presence of an attractive woman is not psychotic.”
“I have better reasons,”said Baley uneasily. (Daneel’s cool glance was too penetrating and soul-dissecting by half. Jehoshaphat!The thing was only a machine.)
“以利亚伙伴，Gladia很吸引你吧，她是不是影响你的判断了？”——
丹尼尔，为什么你那么在意Gladia对你以利亚伙伴的干扰力，能解释一下吗。
当然，我们的警探先生也的确感觉到了丹尼尔的“不正常”：冰冷的目光仿佛能够穿透灵魂——天哪，丹尼尔你真的只是一台机器吗？
是的，是一台吃醋的机器（泥垢
6.
BALEY WAS aware first of enclosure, the absence of the open, and then of a face bending over him.
He stared for a moment without recognition. Then: “ Daneel!”
啊，不知道为什么就觉得这个画面好可爱。贝莱醒了，就看到一张脸弯下来——丹尼尔真是时时刻刻守在一边的忠犬啊。
7.
Danee lsat unobtrusively in one darkened corner.
Baleysaid, “Are you still afraid of Gladia?”
Therobot said, “I do not think it wise to allow you to sleep alone andunprotected.”
……
“Youhave no reservations under the First Law, I hope.”
“Ihave some with respect to the conference you wish arranged. Will you be armedand careful ofyour own safety?”
“Iassure you, I will.”
Daneel delivered himself of a sigh that was somehow so human that for a moment Baley found himself trying to penetrate the darkness that he might study the machine-perfect faceof the other.
Daneelsaid, “I have not always found human behavior logical.”
这里老母亲丹尼尔拦不住贝莱了，都开始“人类一般地叹息”了，然而还是止不住问“武器带好了没”。
真希望贝莱能够更加贴心一点理解一下你老母亲内心的苦衷（不）
综上所述，第二部为我们展现了一个拥有“chiseled，calm and beautiful face”的“godlike”的忠犬形象，虽然他的忠犬对象是个神经有些粗的死傲娇直男，但他们总算又顺利完成了任务。其实看《裸阳》的时候觉得比《钢穴》要枯燥，但是看到结尾还是有些热血沸腾了——啊，无限浩渺壮阔的太空啊。
好了继续啃第三本去。
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